How to fix the comma splice?
May 4th, 2013 in Improve English
Two independent clauses cannot be separated by a comma. In grammars this common writing mistake is often called the comma splice. Study the sentence given below.
- She is very sincere, I like her.
As you can see, in the above example, two independent clauses are separated by a comma. This error can be fixed in three ways.
By changing the comma to a full stop
By using a full stop instead of a comma, you can separate the two clauses into two independent sentences.
- She is very sincere. I like her.
By changing the comma to a semicolon
Semicolons can be used instead of full stops in cases where clauses are grammatically independent but the meaning is closely related.
- She is very sincere; I like her.
By connecting the two clauses with a conjunction
She is very sincere, and I like her.
OR
As she is very sincere, I like her.
OR
I like her because she is very sincere.
Rewrite the following run-on sentences using the patterns discussed above.
1. She is very intelligent, she can solve any problem.
2. It was very hot, we didn’t go out.
3. I invited her she didn’t come.
Answers
1. She is very intelligent. She can solve in problem. / She is very intelligent; she can solve any problem. / She is very intelligent so she can solve any problem.
2. It was very hot. We didn’t go out. / It was very hot; we didn’t go out. / It was very hot so we didn’t go out. / As it was very hot, we didn’t go out.
3. I invited her. She didn’t come. / I invited her; she didn’t come. / I invited her but she didn’t come.
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